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Adding details and polishing, working on the mood and trying to get the ship more authentic.
Its getting closer. I might try to put a little more action in there if I get the time, nothing major tho as I'm pretty happy with the comp at this stage.
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    Default Caution drunk pirates!!


    Hello! soooo, for the pirates theme I chose a more humoristic approach, rather than something serious . these pirates arrive at this oasis island to this very famous rum filled fruit stand and get seriously drunk. This is an advanced progress but I'll post earlier images tomorrow! I'm having some crop tool configuration issues ( several children were playing with my tablet and photoshop :/)

    ! thanks! And All of the images are looking great!!!
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      Great looking work in this thread from everyone. Glad I found this

      Here's my second WIP. Having a ton of fun.

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        bergcrantz - Damn the lighting on your piece is stellar. Makes me want to put on some shades

        angipauly - Nice to see some less serious pirates around here. Love the guy passed out on the floor.

        themightyjmo - Welcome to CgHub! first of good action. The composition could use some work, the square dimension and the main figure smack in the middle make it less dynamic. If you extend your canvas on the right side this would cause the figure to not be centered and you will give the charging background figures more room to breath. Also you have a two major diagonals (arm firing gun and spear) that are angled almost the same. I would remove the spear since it sort of slices the main figure in half It's weird that you have a pirate shooting out of frame opposite of where all the action seems to be. There are no indication that they are surrounded, especially when there seems to be beach behind them. I hope you don't mind the critique, I'm just trying to be helpful!

        So I went back on this and redid the values, looking at it right now I think the two background characters got pushed to far to the background. I also gave him a proper cutlass sabre.

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          Thanks system! Extending the canvas was a big help. I'd been playing with doing it, and you're right. Funny too, I'd already painted out the spear

          Here's the update!

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          @bergcrantz: man, this is gorgeous!
          @system404: i like it, the new version has a better 'flow' for sure.
          @themightyjmo: yeah, FIIIGHT!!

          This morning I realized that the work done last night needs some fixing anyway here's my pic so far.

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            Some more work

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              Quote:
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              her neck is too long, and head is too big. If u wanted to go for a comic exaggerated look, maybe you should exagerate more stuff, to
              I always have problem whit the proportions in Photoshop XD

              angipauly - I like the colors and the little pirtaes

              Some corrections and new background...

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                This challenge is so exciting (what the hell, everything with pirates is!). It's a shame I just found it so close to the deadline, I have some interesting pirate characters, whould be funny put all of them togheter in a great adventure!
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                  Here are my Ideas for the Pirate challenge.
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                    Here's WIP #5!

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                      Hi all! I have never done any pirates before and I put these together quickly. Feedback is welcome or if anyone has a favorite that would be helpful too. Thanks!



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                        I like the storytelling best in #2, but I think #1 is your best composition. If it were me I'd build on that one. Can't wait to see what you come up with!
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                        notpill - Your entry is looking amazing.

                        I scapped my first picture and started over. Here's w.i.p.

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