[Ali-kiani-amin]

Hi there,this is my WIP concept ,i would be glad hearing advices .

[Ali-kiani-amin]

Day 2-i finalized some part,loosing the other parts...main concept is now done,but i should hold on,returning back & rebuilding some part...

[amemoryinblue]

Well, the improvement from 1 to 2 is evident - good job! I have a few tips that I think might give you some ideas...
The figure in the top right part of the image is sitting way too heavily, I think - it's drawing too much attention to itself. It's a great concept to add space and solidity to the image, but it would probably work better if you lower the saturation, envelop it in more mist; more like suggest that there is something solid rather than paint it heavily;
You've created a great atmosphere and effects around the gate itself; all this light and particles are going to illuminate the rest of the objects in cold colors; I think it would add some balance to the whole composition if, at the back of the elements you add sources of light which are orange/dark red - definitely more subdued than the main lightsource, but it would add interesting reflections to all the forms.
Sorry if I'm being vague - it's a great image, definitely want to see how it looks whene everything is redndered - good luck

[Ali-kiani-amin]

Thank you for attending,any way this artwork is finished,here is the final rendered artwork.

[yakuza]

Nice atmosphere, its got a great balance. Really subtle.

[Michael_Galefire]

I really like the final, I didn't even see the figures in front of the gate at first(in the first couple WIPs), but now that they are there the whole piece's intent is much more evident.

Nice work.

[Ali-kiani-amin]

Thanks for your attention.