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Gate of immortality WIP
12-19-2011, 02:41 PM
Hi there,this is my WIP concept ,i would be glad hearing advices .
Last edited by Ali-kiani-amin; 12-19-2011 at 03:31 PM.
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12-21-2011, 08:14 PM
Well, the improvement from 1 to 2 is evident - good job! I have a few tips that I think might give you some ideas...
The figure in the top right part of the image is sitting way too heavily, I think - it's drawing too much attention to itself. It's a great concept to add space and solidity to the image, but it would probably work better if you lower the saturation, envelop it in more mist; more like suggest that there is something solid rather than paint it heavily;
You've created a great atmosphere and effects around the gate itself; all this light and particles are going to illuminate the rest of the objects in cold colors; I think it would add some balance to the whole composition if, at the back of the elements you add sources of light which are orange/dark red - definitely more subdued than the main lightsource, but it would add interesting reflections to all the forms.
Sorry if I'm being vague - it's a great image, definitely want to see how it looks whene everything is redndered - good luck
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02-09-2012, 03:30 PM
Nice atmosphere, its got a great balance. Really subtle.
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