Everythings looking good but the cloth could definitely use more work. Right now you just have what are obviously brush strokes on a plane to signify folds. the folds should flow into themselves more, theyre too separated. Some of them are also very sharp. be sure to look at references for that.
hey mate was interested in getting a tatt with tyreals armour from one side of the chest to the arm got any pictures i can take into a tattoe shop so they know what im on about, kinda need it to look 3d around the shoulder piece