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MajorStudio · 07-27-2011, 02:40 AM

Was required to model a vehicle for school, ~20 hours worked on. Already learned lots working through this project, still; I would like as much feedback as possible regarding poly flow, final outcome and general thoughts.

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-Thanks very much!

VincentStewart · 07-27-2011, 04:20 AM

The area above the front wheel looks too pinched maybe spread them out a bit more or drop the amount of edges. On the actual car the pinch is a design along the car but on your seems unnecessary and looks more like a flaw since it doesn't go along the entire side. Other than that it looks good so far.

b-rodVFX · 07-29-2011, 07:46 AM

There seems to be a bit of a bulge at the top center of the windshield. Also the front grill area doesn't match the reference, maybe you were going off a different picture? I really like the wheels though, that's a cool design.

Roesirus · 07-29-2011, 03:31 PM

It's looking good so far. I am having a hard time spotting the things that are mentioned above however I'm looking foreward to seeing the final project.

I like the details on the lights and grill.

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MajorStudio Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 13 Member Thanks: 1 Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts	Critique Hunting: Lotus Elise 07-27-2011, 02:40 AM Was required to model a vehicle for school, ~20 hours worked on. Already learned lots working through this project, still; I would like as much feedback as possible regarding poly flow, final outcome and general thoughts. -=Reference Image=- -Thanks very much!

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VincentStewart Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 3 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	07-27-2011, 04:20 AM The area above the front wheel looks too pinched maybe spread them out a bit more or drop the amount of edges. On the actual car the pinch is a design along the car but on your seems unnecessary and looks more like a flaw since it doesn't go along the entire side. Other than that it looks good so far.

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b-rodVFX Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 3 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	07-29-2011, 07:46 AM There seems to be a bit of a bulge at the top center of the windshield. Also the front grill area doesn't match the reference, maybe you were going off a different picture? I really like the wheels though, that's a cool design.

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Roesirus Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 4 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	07-29-2011, 03:31 PM It's looking good so far. I am having a hard time spotting the things that are mentioned above however I'm looking foreward to seeing the final project. I like the details on the lights and grill.

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