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djoshua0521 · 06:38 PM

hi, here is my audi a6 model/render frame
please give me some critique on my polyflow or lighting and render
thx.

NightGamerFX · 07-26-2011, 05:31 AM

For starters raise the samples in your AO settings, You'll get a crisper High-res image. Also there is some pinching on your headlights and the little one below it so check your topology in that area.

For your color render the main issue is the image is way to saturated, pic an image to where the ground isn't so blotchy.I also recommend composting your AO on top your diffuse render to get those shadows to make it feel more real.

That's all I can think of right now i'm tired lol, but good job so far, keep at it.

NightGamerFX · 07-26-2011, 05:35 AM

Although I think you used DOF that's why the foreground is blotchy like that but still it would help to find a higher-res image.

djoshua0521 · 07-26-2011, 06:19 AM

thx for the critiques, ya i was trying to figure out a good number for ao sample, i will try default sample next time.

for the final render, I actually put my ao render on top of my color render then i did a mutiply blending, i think its not quit fit the background pic, maybe i need to choose another one.

kaykes · 11-13-2012, 07:36 AM

I really like that render

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djoshua0521 Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 2 Junior Member Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Audi A6 [CCM261] 07-25-2011, 06:32 PM hi, here is my audi a6 model/render frame please give me some critique on my polyflow or lighting and render thx. Attached Thumbnails Last edited by djoshua0521; 07-25-2011 at 06:38 PM.

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NightGamerFX Join Date: Feb 2011 Posts: 50 Member My Mood: Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	07-26-2011, 05:31 AM For starters raise the samples in your AO settings, You'll get a crisper High-res image. Also there is some pinching on your headlights and the little one below it so check your topology in that area. For your color render the main issue is the image is way to saturated, pic an image to where the ground isn't so blotchy.I also recommend composting your AO on top your diffuse render to get those shadows to make it feel more real. That's all I can think of right now i'm tired lol, but good job so far, keep at it.

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NightGamerFX Join Date: Feb 2011 Posts: 50 Member My Mood: Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	07-26-2011, 05:35 AM Although I think you used DOF that's why the foreground is blotchy like that but still it would help to find a higher-res image.

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djoshua0521 Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 2 Junior Member Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	07-26-2011, 06:19 AM thx for the critiques, ya i was trying to figure out a good number for ao sample, i will try default sample next time. for the final render, I actually put my ao render on top of my color render then i did a mutiply blending, i think its not quit fit the background pic, maybe i need to choose another one.

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kaykes Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 49 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	11-13-2012, 07:36 AM I really like that render

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