02-04-2011, 06:11 AM
So I read the pages from the first page of the thread. I skimmed through the rest just to see how far it was going (Dont worry, I'll go back) I think you got a great experiment here. Yea, it is a bit confusing at first, but I think as the story progresses things will get clear. It's actually a lot like something you'd read off Heavy Metal magazine.
It's actually good that the styles change. I mean, it's great to show off and do your best, but if you feel you can produce more with ease on a certain style, do it. I actually enjoy the black and white pages, from what I see.
Granted if you were to take this to a publisher, you'd probably have to be a bit more clear on giving a back story and explaining the world. Other than that, I like it. The cover samples are eye-catching. I'd buy this if it was on the shelf.