Yeah...so my beautiful CLEAN line work's flown out the door in favor of a more sketchy look as I continue to fix things. Oh well. I rather like it and will most likely keep it under the paint when all's said and done. I've always loved a 'rough' look for the same reason I love looking at rough animation.
Few changes - altered hand holding on to the bed sheet(?). Worked on his torso. I'm still 98% sure I've made up muscles where there aren't any - or maybe they are but just not like I've drawn them. Anyway, I've tried to be as accurate as possible. Eh, we'll see.
This has gone from being artistic masturbation* to something of a study that I'd like to get resembling an educated approach at 'correctness'.
*artistic masturbation - unrepentant, often shallow, highly self indulgent forays into creative dribble.