Thank you very much, elecorn.
The first goal of this piece is to refine the quality of the older version. But, it turn out to be total reworks. And I yeah, has to admit that i'm rely too too much on technics stuffs. Those things got me stumble a lot too. And the outcome wasn't what I'm aiming for.
So, this time. I've to go back to the older version again and find out what good about it and what i need to refine in term of quality.
The big point is Background, is telling the whole story. So, I has to blow the command room wall/ceiling solid off.